Hello Verna,
학생이 쓴 원문
I haven’t done anything after last seminar which I presented. I didn’t want to do anything anymore. I know I have a lot of things to do. I’m concerning my future life.
Today is Thursday. Every Friday I have a group study with Korean friends about analysis methodologies. As I told you, I couldn’t attend last meeting. So, I have to prepare for it more perfectly. Am I able to finish it before a meeting? Sometimes I think whether I’m a qualified person to study. I’m confused my abilities.
Anyway I tried to write a composition from this Monday. But I’m finally writing only one. Until tomorrow I will try to write more than two compositions. I promise you.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
It's okay [이름]. I appreciate that you are trying your best to write compositions. In that way, you can practice and enhance your writing skills.
~Verna
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
I haven’t done anything after last seminar which I presented.
>>CORRECT :)
>>I haven뭪 done anything since the last seminar in which I presented some topics. -- BETTER
I didn’t want to do anything anymore.
>>CORRECT :)
I know I have a lot of things to do.
>>CORRECT :)
I’m concerning my future life.
>>I am concerned with my future.Today is Thursday.
>>CORRECT :)
Every Friday I have a group study with Korean friends about analysis methodologies.
>>Every Friday I have a group study with my Korean friends about methodology analysis/analyzing methodologies.
As I told you, I couldn’t attend last meeting.
>>As I told you, I wasn뭪 able to attend our last meeting.
So, I have to prepare for it more perfectly.
>>So, I have to prepare for it carefully.
Am I able to finish it before a meeting?
>>Will I be able to finish it before the meeting?
Sometimes I think whether I’m a qualified person to study.
>>CORRECT :)
>>Sometimes I think whether I뭢 qualified to study.
I’m confused my abilities.
>>I’m confused with my abilities.
Anyway I tried to write a composition from this Monday.
>>Anyway, I was trying to write a composition since this Monday.
But I’m finally writing only one.
>>But I was only able to write one.
Until tomorrow I will try to write more than two compositions.
>>CORRECT :)
I promise you.
>>CORRECT :)
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