Hello Verna,

2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I haven’t done anything after last seminar which I presented. I didn’t want to do anything anymore. I know I have a lot of things to do. I’m concerning my future life. Today is Thursday. Every Friday I have a group study with Korean friends about analysis methodologies. As I told you, I couldn’t attend last meeting. So, I have to prepare for it more perfectly. Am I able to finish it before a meeting? Sometimes I think whether I’m a qualified person to study. I’m confused my abilities. Anyway I tried to write a composition from this Monday. But I’m finally writing only one. Until tomorrow I will try to write more than two compositions. I promise you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]^^ It's okay [이름]. I appreciate that you are trying your best to write compositions. In that way, you can practice and enhance your writing skills. ~Verna   MY CORRECTIONS^^: I haven’t done anything after last seminar which I presented. >>CORRECT :) >>I haven뭪 done anything since the last seminar in which I presented some topics. -- BETTER I didn’t want to do anything anymore. >>CORRECT :) I know I have a lot of things to do. >>CORRECT :)  I’m concerning my future life. >>I am concerned with my future.Today is Thursday. >>CORRECT :) Every Friday I have a group study with Korean friends about analysis methodologies. >>Every Friday I have a group study with my Korean friends about methodology analysis/analyzing methodologies. As I told you, I couldn’t attend last meeting. >>As I told you, I wasn뭪 able to attend our last meeting. So, I have to prepare for it more perfectly. >>So, I have to prepare for it carefully. Am I able to finish it before a meeting? >>Will I be able to finish it before the meeting?  Sometimes I think whether I’m a qualified person to study. >>CORRECT :) >>Sometimes I think whether I뭢 qualified to study. I’m confused my abilities. >>I’m confused with my abilities. Anyway I tried to write a composition from this Monday. >>Anyway, I was trying to write a composition since this Monday. But I’m finally writing only one. >>But I was only able to write one. Until tomorrow I will try to write more than two compositions. >>CORRECT :) I promise you. >>CORRECT :)  

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