Hello Verna,
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Long time no see. I’m sorry that I suddenly postponed classes last week. I couldn’t concentrate on studying because I had a trouble about friends which I have mentioned. Still they didn’t make peace. I think they need time to understand each other. It may not be easy for them to make friend again. Anyway one of them call me almost every day and talk about their story. But I cannot tell her anything about their relationship. Still I don’t understand why they argued. I don’t want to get involved in it anymore.
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Hello there [이름],
I'm grateful for your composition. I understand your situation.
I think if I will be in your situation I will be bothered also. I know you will be great a mediator for your friends. Stay happy! I pray they will have a better relationship.
-Teacher Verna-
Long time no see.
>>Correct
I’m sorry that I suddenly postponed classes last week.
>>I'm sorry that I suddenly postponed my classes last week.
I couldn’t concentrate on studying because I had a trouble about friends which I have mentioned.
>> I can't concentrate on studying because I am troubled about my friends which I have mentioned to you.
Still they didn’t make peace.
>>They are not yet in peace.
I think they need time to understand each other.
>>Correct
It may not be easy for them to make friend again.
>>It may not be easy to make friends again.
Anyway one of them call me almost every day and talk about their story.
>>Anyway, one of them calls me almost every day and talk about their story.
But I cannot tell her anything about their relationship.
>>Correct
Still I don’t understand why they argued.
>>Correct
>>I still don't understand why they argued.
I don’t want to get involved in it anymore.
>> Correct
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