Hello Verna,

Last Sunday, I went to the concert. The singer was Koda Kumi. Even if she is a top singer in Japan, I knew nothing about her. My Korean friend suggested going together and I just went together. Surprisingly the concert was the 10th anniversary of Kumi and it was held on Tokyo Dome. Except I and my friends, there were about 50,000 fans on it. We felt that people not fans were only us. The atmosphere on Tokyo Dome overwhelmed us. Kumi’s dance was really fantastic and her voice was so gorgeous. It was started on 5:30 and finished on 9 o’clock. More than 3 hours was not bored. After coming back home, I searched about Koda Kumi and I’m listening to her music. I could remember that a Korean singer sang a remake of her major song named “Cutie Honey”

Hi [이름],      I think you enjoyed your weekend. Me too. Last Saturday my husbacnd and I watched an artificial snow show here in our city. It wasn't as good as I expected it but I enjoyed it because I was with my hubby. Enjoy your day! -Teacher Verna-   Last Sunday, I went to the concert. >>Last Sunday, I went to a concert. The singer was Koda Kumi. >>Correct Even if she is a top singer in Japan, I knew nothing about her. >>Correct  My Korean friend suggested going together and I just went together. >> My Korean friend invited me to go with them and so we went together.Surprisingly the concert was the 10th anniversary of Kumi and it was held on Tokyo Dome. >>Surprisingly, the concert was the 10th anniversary of Kumi and it was held on Tokyo Dome. Except I and my friends, there were about 50,000 fans on it. >>Except my friends my friends and I, there were about 50,000 fans on it. We felt that people not fans were only us. >> We felt that we were the only people who were not her fans. The atmosphere on Tokyo Dome overwhelmed us. >>Correct Kumi’s dance was really fantastic and her voice was so gorgeous. >>CorrectIt was started on 5:30 and finished on 9 o’clock. >>It  started at 5:30 and finished on 9  'clock. More than 3 hours was not bored. >>More than 3 hours was not boring. After coming back home, I searched about Koda Kumi and I’m listening to her music. >>After coming home, I searched about Koda Kumi and I listened to her music. I could remember that a Korean singer sang a remake of her major song named “Cutie Honey” >>I could remember that a Korean singer sang a remake of her major song entitled "Cutie Honey"