Hello Verna!
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you doing now?
I am so happy with you. It's still raining in Korea.
Owing to raining this time, there are many bad things in Korea.
But, Neverthless, Our people in Korea are able to overcome for the disasters. I hope we would better soon.
Verna?
I have a question for you.
If I write English a little per everday, my skill includings speaking, writing and so on is very good for me?
I think that speaking is much more important in these days.
How do you think about that? Everything related English is important I think.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jane,
How are you doing superwoman? ^^ I'm happy to receive a composition from you. If I remember it correctly I told you before to write so you would improve your English abilities. Just always be guided with the corrections. I believe it will help. Enjoy your day! See you tomorrow!
-Verna-
How are you doing now?
>> CorrectI am so happy with you.
>>Correct
>> I'm so happy to study with you. (Me too ^^)
It's still raining in Korea.
>>CorrectOwing to raining this time, there are many bad things in Korea.
>> Blame it to the rain this time, there are many bad things in Korea.But, Neverthless, Our people in Korea are able to overcome for the disasters.
>>Nevertheless, our people in Korea were able to overcome the disaster.
>>But, Korean people were able to overcome the disaster.
I hope we would better soon.
>> I hope we would be better soon.Verna?I have a question for you.
>>Verna, I have a question for you.If I write English a little per everday, my skill includings speaking, writing and so on is very good for me?
>> If I write a little in English everyday, will it help me improve my writing, speaking and so on? Do you think it's good?I think that speaking is much more important in these days.
>> CorrectHow do you think about that?
>> Correct
Everything related English is important I think. >> I think everything related to English is important.
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