hello your student is sangwook

2016-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

학생이 쓴 원문

hello teacher i exercises these days all body is sore a day after next next wednesday examine the English test Am i improving that when i study your telephone English in korea my English proficiency is the faster i hope teacher korea here come my nation weather is cool these days come here my country i will be take a shower afterschool homework is many many bye bye

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sangwook!
It\'s almost weekend, do you have some plans?
By the way, thank you for inviting me to visit your country. I will probably go there next year. I hope we could meet there someday, kkk...

Take care and have a great day!
-=Teacher CHARLIE=-

hello teacher

>>correct

OR: Hello teacher! (Observe proper capitalization)
i exercises these days

>>I work out nowadays.

OR: I have been working out these past few days.
all body is sore 

>>My body is aching.
a day after next next wednesday examine the English test

>>A day after 2 weeks I will take an English test.
Am i improving that when i study your telephone English in korea

>>Do you think I am improving since I started telephone English?
my English proficiency is the faster i hope 

>>I want to be fluent in English.
teacher korea here come 

>>You have to visit our country teacher.
my nation weather is cool these days 

>>The weather nowadays is cold.
come here my country

>>Come visit our country.
i will be take a shower afterschool homework is many many   
>>I will take a shower after school because I have too many homework.
bye bye

>>correct

OR: Bye.

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