hellooo~! teacher

2017-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Helloooo teacher~! I brought some picture about park ji hoon He is handsome~! Anyway now we have a new president I actully want to talk about my president moon jae in I love him~! He is doing great these day He is fixing every thing that president park did I really like our president And there is good news for me I am president of school So i can meet him on this thursday There is memorial day (anniversity) in gwang ju(city of korea) mabye you can know about this day when you search on a google It is little hard to explain :( sorry // 5.18 anniversity Anyway i can meet the president moon ~!!! I am really exciting now i have to go ~ see you on the class

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Hi baby! Thank you so much for your composition!
You are very lucky because you will be meeting your new president!

I really want to talk more about that baby :)

I cant wait to hear more about this.

Take care and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^


Helloooo teacher~!

>>correct
 I brought some picture about park ji hoon

>>I brought some pictures of Park Ji Hoon.
 He is handsome~!

>>correct
 Anyway now we have a new president

>>correct
 I actully want to talk about my president moon jae in

>>correct
 I love him~!

>>correct
 He is doing great these day

>>He is doing great these days.
 He is fixing every thing that president park did

>>correct
 I really like our president

>>correct
 And there is good news for me

>>correct
 I am president of school

>>I am the president of the school.
 So i can meet him on this thursday

>>correct
 There is memorial day (anniversity) in gwang ju(city of korea)

>>We will celebrate memorial day in Gwanju city.
 mabye you can know about this day when you search on a google

>>correct
 It is little hard to explain :( sorry //

>>correct
 5.18 anniversity

>>5.18 anniversary
 Anyway i can meet the president moon ~!!!

>>Anyway I will meet President Moon!
 I am really exciting now i have to go ~ see you on the class

>>I am really excited now I have to go see you in class!

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