hellooo~! teacher
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Hi baby! Thank you so much for your composition!
You are very lucky because you will be meeting your new president!
I really want to talk more about that baby :)
I cant wait to hear more about this.
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Helloooo teacher~!
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I brought some picture about park ji hoon
>>I brought some pictures of Park Ji Hoon.
He is handsome~!
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Anyway now we have a new president
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I actully want to talk about my president moon jae in
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I love him~!
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He is doing great these day
>>He is doing great these days.
He is fixing every thing that president park did
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I really like our president
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And there is good news for me
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I am president of school
>>I am the president of the school.
So i can meet him on this thursday
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There is memorial day (anniversity) in gwang ju(city of korea)
>>We will celebrate memorial day in Gwanju city.
mabye you can know about this day when you search on a google
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It is little hard to explain :( sorry //
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5.18 anniversity
>>5.18 anniversary
Anyway i can meet the president moon ~!!!
>>Anyway I will meet President Moon!
I am really exciting now i have to go ~ see you on the class
>>I am really excited now I have to go see you in class!
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