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Hello there again Carolyn.

Wow! Thank you very much for doing this.

I appreciate your effort. I can say that you can express yourself well.
Great! You have a good command of English.

Though, you need to be careful with the words you use.

Don\'t worry, it is okay. Don\'t be discouraged with your mistakes, you should be challenged.

Take it as an inspiration to do better. Don\'t give up, okay?

Have a great night, sleep well tonight!
Teacher Nina

It\'s me again & again ~

>> It\'s me again.
This assignments are so instructive!

>> These assignments are so instructive.
I think successful person is Yuna Kim, a figure skater.

>> I think Yuna Kim who is a figure skater is a successful person.

>> OR: Yuna Kim who is a figure skater is a successful person for me.
Her performances were really gorgeous.

>> Correct
She practiced every day bloodly.

>> She practiced hard every day.

She would not rest day.

>> Did you mean: She didn\'t have a rest day.
She has participated in several world competitions, and always joined rankings.

>> She participated in several world competitions and always a part of the rankings.

>> OR: She participated in several world competitions and always a part of the good players.
finally she set a new world record in the world championship.

>> Did you mean:  Finally, she set a new world record in the championship.

>> OR: Finally, she set a new record in the championship around the globe.  
She is entitled to respect.
>> She should be respected.

Also Yuna is compassionate.

>> Correct
>> Better: Yuna is also compassionate.
When Sochi Winter Olymics, she recently won a silver medal in the judgment of polarization.

>> Did you mean:  During the Sochi Winter Olympics, she won a silver medal in the judgement of polarization.

Our contry had been outraged.

>> Correct
Her performance was perfect and all over the world were acknowledged.

>> Did you mean:  Her performance was perfect and acknowledged all over the world.
But she was calm and graciously accepted.

>> But she was calm and graciously accepted it.
She deserves respect it.

>> Did you mean: She deserves to be respected.
Yuna Kim is best successful person in Korea.

>> Did you mean: Yuna Kim is the most successful person in Korea.

>> OR: Yuna Kim is a successful person in Korea.

Thank you!

>> Correct