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2012-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Q,Write everything about your presentation in September. What will be the main topic? Please upload it in our website. A. Our presentaion subject is introducing a company how to builded nowadays position. Like samsun, google, sony. In my case, we investigate PROSPECS company. "http://www.prospecs.com/" This is korean company. And it have almost 30~40 years history. Our main topic is their competitive stratagy...And...sadly...This is what I parted in report.......I think this pacts are why I picked up to presentation... Do you remember that? my part is most important part in our report. And more, I parted one part more this part is important next the most improtant things.. These means, I parted grade 1 part and grade 2 part. Wow I'm so h~~~appy. I know, that this presentation experience is very unique. And This is oppertunity to improve presentation skills, but,I don't have any margin time. So, I can't prepare perpectly... I feel confuse. Anyway, See you tommorow~

강사 첨삭

Hi to you again Su [이름]!       It\'s good that you answered your homework today.^_^ Thank you for writing these things about your presentation. Well, I guess I can help you with it as long as you will make me understand it. I have many questions about it so I guess we really need to talk tomorrow. Thank you for re-enrolling too. You really like to have classes with me huh. Don\'t worry about you presentation, I will do my best to help you with this. I\'ll see you tomorrow! ---Teacher Leny---  Q. Write everything about your presentation in September. What will be the main topic? Please upload it in our website.A. Our presentaion subject is introducing a company how to builded nowadays position. >>>Our presentation in one of our subjects is all about introducing a company. How to obtain or maintain a position on it. Like samsun, google, sony. >>>It is all about companies like Samsung, Google, Sony, and etc. In my case, we investigate PROSPECS company. http://www.prospecs.com/ >>>In our case, we chose PROSPECS company. You can find other information in thier website http://www.prospecs.com/.This is korean company. >>>This is a Korean company. And it have almost 30~40 years history. >>>This company is running for 30-40 years now. >>>This company is operating for over 30-40 years now.Our main topic is their competitive stratagy... >>>Our topic is all about competitive strategy. And...sadly...This is what I parted in report....... >>>And sadly, this is my part in our report. I think this pacts are why I picked up to presentation...>>>I think my report is the reason why I am chosen to do a presentation. Do you remember that? >>>Correct! *** Yeah, I remember you told me about this.*** my part is most important part in our report. >>>My topic is the most important part of our report.And more, I parted one part more this part is important next the most improtant things.. >>>Also, there is another topic that comes next to the most important part of the report. I am included to this topic again.These means, I parted grade 1 part and grade 2 part. >>>This means, I am part  of grade 1 and grade 2. Wow I\'m so h~~~appy.>>>Wow! I\'m so happy!  I know, that this presentation experience is very unique. >>>Correct! >>>I know that this kind of presentation experience is very unique. And This is oppertunity to improve presentation skills, but,I don\'t have any margin time.>>>And this kind of opportunity is one way for me to improve my presentation skills but I don\'t have enough time. So, I can\'t prepare perpectly... I feel confuse. >>>This is the reason why I can\'t prepare it perfectly. I feel confuse now.Anyway, See you tommorow~ >>>Anyway, I\'ll see you tomorrow.

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