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2013-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hi! Chloe. How are you? Are you spending great day? I think you are working now. Cheer up! I have work one our more. We will meet at night! I bought some accessory at internet. Some time I need to pamper myself. It can help me. I want to show it but I don't know how I can upload. Anyway, Have a great day and see you tonight!

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Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Yes you are right, I am working now. Haha! Wow, you know it. Thank you! You too, have a great and calm evening! Just enjoy! I\'ll talk to you then again tonight. -Teacher Chloe Hi! Chloe. >>Hi Chloe! How are you? >>CORRECT! Are you spending great day? >>Are you spending a great day?I think you are working now. >>CORRECT!Cheer up! >>CORRECT! I have work one our more. >>I have to work for an hour more. We will meet at night! >>We will meet tonight! I bought some accessory at internet. >>I bought some computer accessories online. Some time I need to pamper myself. >>Sometimes, I need to pamper myself. >>I need to pamper myself sometimes. It can help me. >>CORRECT! >>It helps me. I want to show it but I don\'t know how I can upload. >>I want to show it to you but I don\'t know how to upload. Anyway, Have a great day and see you tonight! >>Anyway, have a great day. I will talk to you tonight!

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