Hellow
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Chloe.
How are you? Are you spending great day?
I think you are working now.
Cheer up! I have work one our more.
We will meet at night!
I bought some accessory at internet.
Some time I need to pamper myself.
It can help me. I want to show it but I don't know how I can upload.
Anyway, Have a great day and see you tonight!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Yes you are right, I am working now. Haha! Wow, you know it. Thank you! You too, have a great and calm evening! Just enjoy! I\'ll talk to you then again tonight.
-Teacher Chloe
Hi! Chloe.
>>Hi Chloe! How are you?
>>CORRECT!
Are you spending great day?
>>Are you spending a great day?I think you are working now.
>>CORRECT!Cheer up!
>>CORRECT!
I have work one our more.
>>I have to work for an hour more. We will meet at night!
>>We will meet tonight! I bought some accessory at internet.
>>I bought some computer accessories online. Some time I need to pamper myself.
>>Sometimes, I need to pamper myself.
>>I need to pamper myself sometimes. It can help me.
>>CORRECT!
>>It helps me.
I want to show it but I don\'t know how I can upload.
>>I want to show it to you but I don\'t know how to upload. Anyway, Have a great day and see you tonight!
>>Anyway, have a great day. I will talk to you tonight!
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