Hellow! Shy

Dear [Name] good is today class! First, at the prononciation part; I couldn't hear your pronounciation of 'BUSY' [bisi]. As I know that the pronounciation is [bizi], am I right? If both is right, Let me know that. Second, about a new ward " nominate" is good point for me. I'll make sure this ward is very useful. I heard MP3 file of today class one more time, I am so shy. I would like to explain about estimation. We will estimate and be estimated every year. The grades is A+ to D according to output his job. In case A+, A, get a point 1.5. In case B+ to C/C- get a point 1.0 Under C- or D get a point 0.5 If someone get the prize of special person: presiend etc, he get more point. Anyway, today class very helpful for me, Thanks, [이름]

  Hi again Mr. [이름]!!!!   I'm sorry if you were not able to understand my pronunciation of 'busy' the last time, I was having a hard time speaking during those times hehe!!   But anyway, you are correct... It is pronounced as (bi-zi)...   I now understand your point sytem in your company... So the output of your job will be graded, and when you get the highest accumulative points at the end of the year, you will be declared as a winner.. That sounds like a good strategy for the emlpoyees to work harder.. I hope you will get the highest points for this year Mr. [이름]!!     I'll see you later Sir!!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy                                                                                                                                                                                                             Meanwhile, here are my corrections for you:     How good is today class!>> How good today.s class is!   First, at the prononciation part;>> First, on the pronunciation part;   I couldn't hear your pronounciation of 'BUSY' [bisi].>> CORRECT   As I know that the pronounciation is [bizi], am I right?>>What I know is that the pronunciation should be [bizi], am I right? (you are right!!)   If both is right, Let me know that.>> If both are right, let me know.   Second, about a new ward " nominate" is good point for me.>> Secondly, about the new word " nominate" , it is a good point for me.   I'll make sure this ward is very useful.>> I'll make sure this word will be very useful.   I heard MP3 file of today class one more time, I am so shy.>> I listened to the MP3 file of today's class one more time, I was so shy. (or maybe you mean 'embarrassed')   I would like to explain about estimation.>> CORRECT   We will estimate and be estimated every year.>> CORRECT   The grades is A+ to D according to output his job.>> The grades are from A+ to D according to the output of the job.   In case A+, A, get a point 1.5.>> In the case of A+ and A, it is equivalen to 1.5 points. >> In the case of A+ and A, you will  get 1.5 points.   In case B+ to C/C- get a point 1.0>> In the case of B+ to C and C-, it is equivalen to 1.0 point. >> In the case of B+ to C and C-, you will  get 1.0 point.   Under C- or D get a point 0.5 >> For C- or D, you will get 0.5.   If someone get the prize of special person: presiend etc, he get more point>> If someone got a prize from a special person, like presiend etc, he will get more points.>> If someone got a prize from a high-ranking official, like presiend etc, he will get more points. Anyway, today class very helpful for me, >> Anyway, today.s class was very helpful to me.