help ?
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I am not sure that this policy is substantially helping parents?
I wonder whether the children would like to go to the facilities on the weekend?
When the children are young, they need to spend the more time with their parents.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for voicing your opinion. You are right, most children don\'t have choices even if they want to spend time with their parents. I think it really requires sacrifice to fully support a child.
Have a great day!
Aki~
I am not sure that this policy is substantially helping parents.
>> CORRECT!
I wonder whether the children would like to go to the facilities on the weekend?
>>> CORRECT!
When the children are young, they need to spend the more time with their parents.
>>> When children are young, they need to spend more time with their parents.
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