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Hi Nina, If you don't mind, could you pleas check following notes for me? This afternoon, our CAC senior manager and field service egnineer met him at the service center and the talk was successful. We have thoroughly checked his vehicle for last few days and fixed all the problems except the headlamps that will be replaced upon we receive new parts from the States. We explained all the details of the issues and resolutions as well. He was happy about works carried out and seemed satisfied with the services offered. We have tried hard to convice him how sincerely we care about his problems and how important his satisfaction is to us. He appreciated efforts we, including our top managemet, have put in to resolve his concerns. He took his vehicle back and went home happily today.

Hi there SIR [이름]^^ Thank you for giving me the chance to check these notes. I hope I was able to help you out. If you have any questions about your compositon,just feel free to raise it in class. I am really excited to talk to you. See you later in class! Have a great night! Teacher Nina Hi Nina, >> Correct!If you don\'t mind, could you pleas check following notes for me? >> If you don\'t mind, could you pleas check the following notes for me? This afternoon, our CAC senior manager and field service egnineer met him at the service center and the talk was successful. >> This afternoon, our CAC senior manager and field service engineer met him at the service center and the conversation was successful. OR >> This afternoon, our CAC senior manager and field service engineer met him at the service center and the meeting was a success. We have thoroughly checked his vehicle for last few days and fixed all the problems except the headlamps that will be replaced upon we receive new parts from the States. >> We have thoroughly checked his vehicle for the last few days and fixed all of the problems except the head lamps. It will be replaced when we receive the new parts from the United States. We explained all the details of the issues and resolutions as well. >> Correct! He was happy about works carried out and seemed satisfied with the services offered. >> He was happy because his concerns were carried out and he seemed satisfied with the services offered. We have tried hard to convice him how sincerely we care about his problems and how important his satisfaction is to us. >> We tried hard to convice him how sincerely we care about his problems and how important his satisfaction means to us. He appreciated efforts we, including our top managemet, have put in to resolve his concerns. >> He appreciated our efforts, including our top management and we were able to resolve his concerns. He took his vehicle back and went home happily today. >> Correct!