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Nice Cathy!
You are very enthusiastic in writing today.^^
You are good not only speaking and also in writing. You are also good in grammar but it still needs improvement.
Enjoy the rest of your day. Take care.^^
-T. Naomi
my advantage is that I am very positive
>>My advantage is that I am very positive.
>>My advantage is that I am a very positive person.
I can make other people feel happy.
>>correct
my disadvantage is that when I have to determine importance things
>>My disadvantage is that when I have to be determined to important things.
it takes a lot of time
>>It takes a lot of time.
so now I endeavor to determine impotant things in deadline one day ago
>>So, now I endeavor to determine the important things with deadline a day before.
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