Help me the resume

Hi teacher Tiny I want to try to write my resume. Beacuse I will leave from navy in two month, I want to entrance the company in which I major. I need your help. Please look over my writing. Growth The rich or the poor didn't make me growth but normal living condition. my father is very industrial and powerful, my mother spends a lot of time volunteering. So They made me kind and having look for others. I have had challenge since I was a child, so my challenge is apply everywhere, whatever I do.

Hello there! Thank you for writing in your composition board. I believe that you can make a nice resume.  I am very willing to help you in doing it. Anyway, I made some corrections in your letter.  Please take a look and study: Hi teacher Tiny >> Hi teacher Tiny! (Punctuation Mark)I want to try to write my resume. >> Correct! Beacuse I will leave from navy in two month, I want to entrance the company in which I major. >> I will leave from the navy two months from now so I want to apply in a company where I can utilize my skills that I have learned from my major. (Sentence Construction) OR YOU CAN SAY >> I will leave from the navy two months from now so I want to apply in a company where my major is related. I need your help. Please look over my writing. >> Correct! :)Growth >> Correct! :)The rich or the poor didn\'t make me growth but normal living condition. >> Being rich or being poor didn\'t affect my growth for I had a normal living condition. (Sentence Construction) my father is very industrial and powerful, >> My father is very industrious and powerful. (Capitalization, Punctuation mark, Spelling) my mother spends a lot of time volunteering. >> My mother spends a lot of time volunteering.  (Capitalization) So They made me kind and having look for others.  >> They raised me with a caring attitude towards other people. (Sentence Construction) I have had challenge since I was a child, so my challenge is apply everywhere, whatever I do. >> I have had a lot of challenges since I was a child, so right now, it is another trial for me to look for a job somewhere. (Sentence Construction)