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hello I will attech the paragraph. Isaac Newton is the one of the most effective persons. His achievements in science and math are not only many but also very useful. First achievement is the ‘Newton’s laws’. Anyone who has ever studied physics must know these laws. This explains the principles related to moving object and make us be able to expect what will happen to the object. Another achievement is the discovery about the reason why an apple falls down. This is because the earth has the attractive force. Other many things which happen in earth could be understood by this theory. The third achievement is differential and integral calculus. They are very major concepts and foundation of many formulas in math. Thanks to this, we are able to solve a number of equations. All Newton studied contributed to the development of a great number of things. I want to be a person like Newton. I hope that I discover new things and this contributes to this world and the lives of many people

Hello there [이름]!! A pleasant morning to you my dear!:) Welcome back! ^^ Please check the corrections I made here. Hope it\'ll help you! :) Have a nice day and see you! T.Kristel hello >> CORRECT!!I will attech the paragraph. >> I attached here the paragraph.Isaac Newton is the one of the most effective persons. >> Isaac Newton is one of the most effective persons of all time. His achievements in science and math are not only many but also very useful. >> CORRECT!! First achievement is the ‘Newton’s laws’. Anyone who has ever studied physics must know these laws. >> His first achievement is the Newton\'s law. Anyone who has ever studied physics must know these laws. This explains the principles related to moving object and make us be able to expect what will happen to the object. >> This explains the principles related to moving objects and make us be able to expect what will happen to the object.  Another achievement is the discovery about the reason why an apple falls down. >>CORRECT!! >>Another achievement is the discovery of the Law of Gravity. This is because the earth has the attractive force. Other many things which happen in earth could be understood by this theory. >> This is because the earth has an attractive force. Many other things happening on earth could be understood by this theory. The third achievement is differential and integral calculus. >> The third achievement is the differential and integral calculus.  They are very major concepts and foundation of many formulas in math. >> They are the major concepts and foundation of many formulas in math. Thanks to this, we are able to solve a number of equations. >> CORRECT!! All Newton studied contributed to the development of a great number of things. I want to be a person like Newton. >> All of Newton\'s studies contributed to the development of a great number of things. CORRECT!! I hope that I discover new things and this contributes to this world and the lives of many people >> I hope that I discover new things too that would contribute to this world and the lives of many people.