help polly

2026-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Polly

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I made some situations haha 1.Introduce myself My name is chloe I\'m Edward\'s mom I have been here for 9 months Nice to meet everyone! At first, I didn\'t signed up Because I wasn\'t good at english and I was very shy But I have the courage for edward to come here (????) Thank you for having a good time! 2. Somepeople ask me a question but when I don\'t know It\'s hard to say it all of a sudden, Pass Please or I used english for a long time So my brain isn\'t working

강사 첨삭

Hi, Chloe!
I really like these situations you created. They feel very natural and useful in real life, especially for classroom speaking. It’s great that you are preparing ready-made expressions for yourself, because that will help you feel more confident when speaking.

Your introduction is warm and friendly, and I can feel your personality coming through. The second part is also very practical and honest. Maybe you can also try these responses:

1. If you don\'t understand the question
Could you please repeat that a little more slowly?

2. If you feel shy or need time to think
Let me think for a moment…

3. If you want to avoid answering directly
I’m still learning about that part.

4. If you don\'t know what to say
I’m not really sure how to answer that right now.
I’m sorry, I’m not sure about that yet.

I hope these responses are helpful. Good luck at the parents’ meeting! I’m sure you’ll do well!
~Teacher Polly

I made some situations haha
>>I came up with possible scenarios, haha.

1. Introduce myself
>>CORRECT

My name is chloe
>>My name is [Name].

I\'m Edward\'s mom.
>>CORRECT

I have been here for 9 months.
>>CORRECT

Nice to meet everyone!
>>CORRECT

At first, I didn\'t signed up Because I wasn\'t good at english and I was very shy
>>At first, I didn’t sign up because I’m not really good at English and I’m very shy.

But I have the courage for edward to come here (????)
>>But I had the courage to come here for Edward.

Thank you for having a good time!
>>Thank you for listening, and I hope we all have a good time!

2. Some people ask me a question but when I don\'t know
>>If someone asks me a question and I don’t know the answer.

It\'s hard to say it all of a sudden, Pass Please
>>It’s hard to answer suddenly, so I might say, “Pass, please.”

or
I used english for a long time So my brain isn\'t working
>>I might say, “I haven’t used English for a long time, so my brain isn’t working.”

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