Helping others

2018-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Helping other people is very good action and we have learned it since we were younger. I also agree with helping people in trouble. However, I know that there are many examples of being charged after heping someone in trouble. I will tell you an example. A woman went to beach and was swimming in the sea. Suddenly, because of a rip current, she fell into water. It was an urgent situation but a man who was around the beach dived into water and rescued her and then he did CPR on her. After a few minutes, she regained her counsciousness. From this example, everyone expect that she will appreciate to him for rescue, but she didn't and charged him for sexual assault. Thesedays, there are many similar instances and it makes people hesitate to heping others. It cannot be helped that this society has this tendency. I have a question : it makes people hesitate to heping others >> oringinally I want to write it as it makes people don't help others. Is it right?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jay!(\",)

It\'s so sad that people now are suing those who helped them instead of thanking them. What will happen then in 20 years? in 50 years? I don\'t want to imagine.

~Lynn   

Helping other people is very good action and we have learned it since we were younger.

>> correct!

I also agree with helping people in trouble.

>> correct!

However, I know that there are many examples of being charged after heping someone in trouble.

>> correct!

I will tell you an example.

>> correct!

A woman went to beach and was swimming in the sea.

>> A woman went to the beach and was swimming in the sea.

Suddenly, because of a rip current, she fell into water.

>> Suddenly, because of a rip current, she drowned.

 It was an urgent situation but a man who was around the beach dived into water and rescued her and then he did CPR on her.

>>  It was an urgent situation so a man who was around the beach dived into water and rescued her and then he did CPR on her.

After a few minutes, she regained her consciousness.

>> correct!

From this example, everyone expect that she will appreciate to him for rescue, but she didn\'t and charged him for sexual assault.

>> Everyone expected that she will appreciate him for rescuing her but she didn\'t, instead she charged him with sexual assault.

These days, there are many similar instances and it makes people hesitate to heping others.

>> These days, there are many similar instances and it makes people hesitate to help others.

 It cannot be helped that this society has this tendency. 

>> correct!
 I have a question : it makes people hesitate to heping others  oringinally I want to write it as it makes people don\'t help others. Is it right?

>> It makes people hesitate to help others or It makes people don\'t want to help others are both correct.

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