her hanging up on me
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I have a same aged friend. Today on our way home from church, I started to talk about the story that sewage leaked into my garden, and it was about in the middle of that story; she interrupted me to talk about her experiences within her neighborhood times ago. Might be she was so excited to talk about those troubles that she didn’t seem to be aware of her hanging up on me. But I sympathizingly listened to her until she finished to talk all of them. At the moment actually I was smiling in my mind remebering what I had glanced at this text last night for preview. What a helpful text was this! I owed my restraining from making the same mistake as she did to this lesson.// the lesson helped me not to commit the same netiquette back to her.
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Ms. [Name]!! It is amazing that you actually are applying the things that we discussed during our classtime to real life. It is funny that we just talked about hanging up on somebody and there you actually experienced it. ^^ It is a good thing that you are actually polite and kind. Anyways see you later Ms. [Name].
Lei :-)
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Today on our way home from church, I started to talk about the story of the sewage that leaked into my garden,
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and it was about in the middle of that story;
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she interrupted me to talk about her experiences within her neighborhood times ago.
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Might be she was so excited to talk about those troubles that she wasn't aware of her hanging up on me.
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But I sympathizingly listened to her until she finished to talk all of them.
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At the moment actually I was smiling in my mind remembering what I had glanced at this text last night for preview.
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What a helpful text was this!
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I owed my restraining from making the same mistake as she did from this lesson.
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the lesson helped me not to commit the same etiquette back to her.
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