Here are some statements that you can say to yourself.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am the happiest to have a loving family.
I succeed most of the work in the second. So I\\\'m not afraid of failure.
I\\\'m happy with everything I have.So I am not greedy.
I don\\\'t blame others. I try to think it\\\'s my problem.
If I want to do something, I just do it
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Have a great Christmas ! ヾ(＠^∇^＠)ノ
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름]!^^
I succeed most of the work in the second. So I\\\'m not afraid of failure.
I\\\'m happy with everything I have.So I am not greedy.
I don\\\'t blame others. I try to think it\\\'s my problem.
>> I don\'t blame others so I think it\'s my problem.
Your answers are indeed inspiring.
I really like number 4.
It does make a lot of sense.
Andrea
I am the happiest to have a loving family.
>> Correct
I succeed most of the work in the second. So I\\\'m not afraid of failure.
>> I succeed at work on the second time so I am not afraid to fail.
I\\\'m happy with everything I have.So I am not greedy.
>> I\'m happy with everything that I have so I am to greedy.
I don\\\'t blame others. I try to think it\\\'s my problem.
>> I don\'t blame others so I think it\'s my problem.
If I want to do something, I just do it
>> If i want to do something, I just do it.
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