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2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What ____ you eat for lunch yesterday? did 2. I ____ English for two years. studied 3. Sorry, I ____ hear you at the door. didn't 4. ____ you see Jody's new dog yesterday? Did 5. We ____ not happy after the sad ending. were I borrowed two books at the library and these are very interesting. Maybe I can finish one of books in two days. I already read half of the book so I can finish this book if I want it to be finished. It is very popular book so when I got the library, there was only one book left. What a lucky guy here. If it is possible , I want to borrow more as I finish reading this book which of writer is Berber. I heard that the last volume of this series of book will be published in this year. I just made a decision to read book regularly then probably I can give you some recommend and review for you. thank you~!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Happy Tuesday. ^^ You got a perfect score again. ^^ Thanks for your concern. I would love to hear your recommendations.I will try to find some books of the writer your mentioned below. I hope that you will have enough rest tonight. Teacher is so proud of you because you put into practice my suggestions. Have a great night. Teacher Nina   1. What ____ you eat for lunch yesterday?did >> Correct! 2. I ____ English for two years. studied >> Correct! 3. Sorry, I ____ hear you at the door.didn\'t >> Correct! 4. ____ you see Jody\'s new dog yesterday?Did >> Correct! 5. We ____ not happy after the sad ending.were >> Correct! I borrowed two books at the library and these are very interesting. >> I borrowed two books in the library and these materials are very interesting. Maybe I can finish one of books in two days. >> Maybe I can finish one of the books in two days. I already read half of the book so I can finish this book if I want it to be finished. >> Correct!   It is very popular book so when I got the library, there was only one book left. >> It is a very popular book so when I arrived in the library, there was only one book left. What a lucky guy here. >> Correct! If it is possible , I want to borrow more as I finish reading this book which of writer is Berber. >> If it is possible, I want to borrow more as I finish reading this book, the writer is Berber. I heard that the last volume of this series of book will be published in this year. >> I heard that the last volume of this series of book will be published this year.I just made a decision to read book regularly then probably I can give you some recommend and review for you. >> I just made a decision to read a book regularly, then probably I can recommend and review some for you. thank you~! >> Correct!

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