here is a journey of 7.23 and purifier.

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Q1 - He works .. hard Q2 - He followed the lecture ... closely Q3 - They ... do any work hardly Q4 - She ... refused to help flatly Q5 - It's supposed to be a secret, but it is ... known widely Q6 - The dentist asked her to open her mouth ... widely Q7 - That idiot ... crashed into us nearly Q8 - He always comes ... late Today, I want to study hard, but I felt sleepy. Yes I know that I'm always tired. but today I felt sleepy all day. so I dozed when I took a class. I tried to keep awake but it was no use. Even I couldn't remember today's class. So I decided to take a rest in my room. The purifier. Purifier can make us to get cold/hot water freshly. It is very convenient machine. But if you don't care it frequently, it gives you water which contain many germs. Not to be contaminated, Water should be managed by purifier company. So, it is the better to using rental service rather than buying it.

강사 첨삭

Impressive homework [이름]. ^_^ Wow! I appreciate your great interest in learning. No worries if you were sleepy, the important thing is that you were able to participate and share your ideas. You were confident in answering the questions. Keep it up! Please go over the corrections below. Talk to you tomorrow. Teacher Nina   Q1 - He works ..hard >> Correct! Q2 - He followed the lecture ...closely >> Correct! Q3 - They ... do any workhardly >> Correct! Q4 - She ... refused to helpflatly >> Correct! Q5 - It\'s supposed to be a secret, but it is ... knownwidely >> Correct! Q6 - The dentist asked her to open her mouth ...widely >> wide Q7 - That idiot ... crashed into usnearly >> Correct! Q8 - He always comes ...late >> Correct! Today, I want to study hard, but I felt sleepy. >> Today, I wanted to stud hard but I felt sleepy. Yes I know that I\'m always tired. >> Correct! but today I felt sleepy all day. >> Correct! so I dozed when I took a class. >> Did you mean: So I dozed when before I took the class. I tried to keep awake but it was no use. >> i tried to stay awake but it was useless. Even I couldn\'t remember today\'s class. >> I even couldn\'t remember today\'s topic/ class. So I decided to take a rest in my room. >> Correct! The purifier. >> Correct! Purifier can make us to get cold/hot water freshly. >> Purifier make us get cold/ hot water. >> OR: Purifier helps us to get clean water. It is very convenient machine. >> It is a very convenient machine. But if you don\'t care it frequently, it gives you water which contain many germs. >> Did you mean: But if you don\'t clean it frequently, it will give you water which contains a lot of germs. Not to be contaminated, Water should be managed by purifier company. >> Did you mean: In order for the water not to be contaminted, it should be managed by a purifier company. So, it is the better to using rental service rather than buying it. >> So, it is better to use a rental service rather than buying it.

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