Here is my answer

2012-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Here is my answer to the question "What make you the best candidate for this position" My career make me a ideal candidate. I've been woked at a hotel for 2years. During this period, I learned how to respect to the guest. Reading the guest's need and offering them a individual sevice make the guest satisfied. with my career, I can perform my new job professionally in your company. T[이름]k you for checking^^

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Hi Ann!^^ I really appreciate you writing. Keep on writing if you have time! T.Dianne   Here is my answer to the question \"What make you the best candidate for this position?\">>CORRECTMy career make me a ideal candidate. I\'ve been woked at a hotel for 2years. During this period, I learned how to respect to the guest. >>My career makes me an ideal candidate for this position because I\'ve woked at a hotel for 2years. During this period, I learned how to respect the guests.Reading the guest\'s need and offering them a individual sevice make the guest satisfied. with my career, I can perform my new job professionally in your company.>>Attending to the guest\'s need and offering them my sevice makes the guest feel  satisfied. With my career, I can perform my new job professionally in your company.>>CORRECTT[이름]k you for checking^^ >>CORRECT [Good job Ann and you\'re welcome!]^^  

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