Here is my answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. promotion
2. look it up on the internet
3. trouble
4. concentrate
5. focus on
6. conducive
I got a promotion on my company.
Please, look it up on the internet.
I got some trouble with that problem.
I can't focus on my affairs.
Early rising is conducive to health.
Thanks for reading.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
I got a promotion on my company.
>> I was promoted at work.
Please, look it up on the internet.
>> correct
I got some trouble with that problem.
>> I got some trouble with that matter.
I can\'t focus on my affairs.
>> correct
Early rising is conducive to health.
>> Waking up early is conducive to health.
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