Here is my answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. niece
2. nephew
3. set it properly
4. every time
5. electric appliance
When I was young I met a young boy younger than me who is the son of someone.
I have not met nephew at my life.
Please set it properly at exact order.
We drink water every time.
Electric appliance is always needed electricity when using by someone.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
When I was young I met a young boy younger than me who is the son of someone.
>> When I was young, I met a boy who was younger than me.
I have not met nephew at my life.
>> I don\'t have a nephew.
Please set it properly at exact order.
>> Please set it properly in the right order.
We drink water every time.
>> correct
Electric appliance is always needed electricity when using by someone.
>> An electric appliance always needs electricity for it work.
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