Here is my homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you agree that breakfast is the most important meal of the day?
I'm advocate of having a breakfast. There is also a well-known proveb which stresses the importance of breakfast. "Eat breakfast like an emperor and diner like a poor, but don't skip your meal. I consider this meal as an important factor for several reasons. First, It helps us wake our brain.
According to some research, the movement of mouth and organs start to work by consuming food and its energy boosts up our body to start the day early in the morning. Second, It prevents ulcer or digestion conditions. If we spend several hours being in fast, we are getting starving so badly and prompt to eat fast or heavy. This kind of food consumption pattern is very harmful for our body. We can maintain our body healthy and fit by eating breakfast because it keeps our body from overeating in lunch or dinner and gastric juice which plays a significant factor. Breakfast is definitely the source of energy of our day.
강사 첨삭
A great Thursday morning to you Martha!
Have you eaten your breakfast? I\'m sure you have.
Try to eat an apple before or after breakfast too as it helps burn down fats as well.
That\'ll keep us away from the doctor as well as unwanted fats in our body.
Later!
T. Aurora
Do you agree that breakfast is the most important meal of the day?I\'m advocate of having a breakfast.
>>I\'m an advocate of having breakfast.
There is also a well-known proveb which stresses the importance of breakfast.
>>Correct!
\"Eat breakfast like an emperor and diner like a poor, but don\'t skip your meal.
>> \"Eat breakfast like an emperor and diner like a beggar, but don\'t skip your meal.\"
>> \"Eat breakfast like an emperor and diner like a poor man, but don\'t skip your meal.\"
I consider this meal as an important factor for several reasons.
>>Correct!
First, It helps us wake our brain.
>>First, it helps wake our brain up.According to some research, the movement of mouth and organs start to work by consuming food and its energy boosts up our body to start the day early in the morning.
>>Correct!
Second, It prevents ulcer or digestion conditions.
>>Second, it prevents ulcer or digestive conditions.
If we spend several hours being in fast, we are getting starving so badly and prompt to eat fast or heavy.
>> If we spend several hours being fasting, then we will starve so badly and prompt us to eat fast or heavy.
This kind of food consumption pattern is very harmful for our body.
>>Correct!
We can maintain our body healthy and fit by eating breakfast because it keeps our body from overeating in lunch or dinner and gastric juice which plays a significant factor.
>>We can maintain a healthy and fit body by eating breakfast because it keeps our body from overeating during lunch or dinner and gastric juice which plays a significant factor.
Breakfast is definitely the source of energy of our day.
>>Correct!
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