Here is my homework. ^^

Hi [이름]! ^.^

Happy Wednesday! ^^

In my case, I also prefer to spend my entire life in one place.

It is very convenient.

In addition, I can also save a lot of money.

However, just like what you indicated in your composition, it is really costly to buy a house that you can consider yours.

Even though that\'s the case, I am still trying my best to earn and save money to buy a good house for my family, specially for my parents.

By the way, let\'s talk about your composition now.

You presented your answer very well.

Your ideas are well-delivered through your writing.

However, you just missed to check few errors.

They are proper usage of prepositions and conjunctions.

That\'s all.

As a whole, you really did great in doing your homework! ^^

Keep on improving! ^^

Anyway, see you very soon! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I prefer to live in one place.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I prefer to live in one place during my entire life.

Frankly speaking, I can\'t afford to choose which one I prefer.
>> CORRECT!

To move to another place, I have to spend much money.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Moving to another place, I have to spend a lot of money.

>> OR: Moving from one place to another will make me spend a lot of money.

I can\'t ignore the economic reason.
>> CORRECT!

Actually, I want to live a good place instead of current house.
>> Actually, I want to live in a good place instead in my current house.

But I have no enough money to buy a house; I have still lived in this house for 6years.
>> However, I don\'t have enough money to buy a house. I have still lived in this house for 6 years.

>> OR: However, I have no enough money to buy a house. I have still lived in this house for 6 years.

If it is not related with my job, I won\'t live in Seoul.
>> CORRECT!

In the future, I wish I lived in the country after my retirement.
>> CORRECT!

>> BETTER: In the future, I wish to live in the country after my retirement.

If that happens, I don\'t need to consider house problems anymore.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: If that happens, I don\'t need to consider any house problems anymore.