Here is my homework.

2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. pleasant 2. routine 3. 1 hour ahead 4. manage my time 5. daily It is a pleasant day to go for a ride bike. Make exercise a part of your daily routine. Done your job 1 hour ahead than usual. I can manage my time well. My mother always get a milk for daily use.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


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Cheers!
Teacher Jean



It is a pleasant day to go for a ride bike.

>> It is a pleasant day to go for a bike ride. [Bike ride may refer to motor bike or bicycle.]

>> or: It is a pleasant day to go for cycling. [Cycling refers to bicycle.]


 Make exercise a part of your daily routine.

>> Make exercising a part of your daily routine. 


 Done your job 1 hour ahead than usual.

>> Do your job 1 hour ahead than usual.

>> or: Are you done with your job 1 hour ahead than usual?


 I can manage my time well.

>> correct


 My mother always get a milk for daily use.

>> My mother always gets milk for daily use.

>> or: My mother always gets a bottle/carton of milk for daily use.



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