here is my homework

2019-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Your homework is easy ^^ so I made sentenses to study hard 1. I am reading a book It\'s art book. I like modern art 2. It\' rianing I don\'t like it raining because I feel bad when it rains 3. He is repairing his bike He is buying a component to repair his bike 4. They are watching a film They are waiting to watch a film 5. The cat is sleeping on the chair It\'s cute. 6, Jane and Emily are doing their homework. There\'s deadline is on friday 7. Bill is waiting at the bus stop. Bill is listening to music while waiting for a bus 8, We are listening to the radio I often listen to the radio while driving 9, The children are playing a game The children have to study but they are just playing games. 10 Laura is walking the dog. Many dogs are takeing a walk in the park in the evening

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. You are awesome! Keep it up! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

1. I am reading a book.
>>CORRECT
It\'s art book. I like modern art
>>It\'s an art book. 
2. It\' raining
>>CORRECT
I don\'t like it raining because I feel bad when it rains
>>I don\'t like it when it\'s raining because I feel bad when it rains.
3. He is repairing his bike
>>CORRECT
He is buying a component to repair his bike
>>CORRECT
4. They are watching a film
>>CORRECT
They are waiting to watch a film
>>CORRECT
5. The cat is sleeping on the chair
>>CORRECT
It\'s cute.
>>CORRECT
6, Jane and Emily are doing their homework.
>>CORRECT
There\'s deadline is on friday
>>The deadline is on Friday.
7. Bill is waiting at the bus stop.
>>CORRECT
Bill is listening to music while waiting for a bus
>>CORRECT
8, We are listening to the radio
>>CORRECT
I often listen to the radio while driving
>>CORRECT
9, The children are playing a game
>>CORRECT
The children have to study but they are just playing games.
>>CORRECT
10 Laura is walking the dog.
>>CORRECT
Many dogs are takeing a walk in the park in the evening
>>Many dogs are seen walking around the park in the evening.

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