here is my homework teacher.

2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Are you shopping for a health club to join so you can get in shape? 2. Shop wisely! You could end up choosing the wrong club and losing more money than pounds. 3. You may find out too late that _d_ health clubs aren't for you. 4. _d_ San Diego fitness experts recommend thoroughly checking out several health clubs before you join one. 5. First, know what you want and need in the fitness facility, and don't pay for what you'll never use. 6. If you only want exercise classes, an exercise studio without weight machines and locker rooms may work for you. 7. If you're looking for _a place to only do bodybuilding, you'll be happy in a basic gym. 8. You may be in the market for a full-service health club; then, make sure it offers lots of activities. 9. Look for a place near your house, and check out _d_ exercise instructors and personal trainers. 10. They should be educated in physical education or certtified by the organization such as the American Council on exercise.

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Hello again my dear [이름]^^ Thank you for alloting some time to do your homework. I really appreciate it. I hope that you will have enough rest tonight for tomorrow. You did a good job! Please go over the corrections for your further improvement. If you have any questions, just raise it in class. I will be glad to discuss it to you. Good night! Take Care! Teacher Nina 1. Are you shopping for a health club to join so you can get in shape? >> Correct!2. Shop wisely! You could end up choosing the wrong club and losing more money than pounds. >> Correct!3. You may find out too late that _d_ health clubs aren\'t for you. >> Correct!4. _d_ San Diego fitness experts recommend thoroughly checking out several health clubs before you join one. >> Correct!5. First, know what you want and need in the fitness facility, and don\'t pay for what you\'ll never use. >> A6. If you only want exercise classes, an exercise studio without weight machines and locker rooms may work for you. >> Correct!7. If you\'re looking for _a place to only do bodybuilding, you\'ll be happy in a basic gym. >> Correct!8. You may be in the market for a full-service health club; then, make sure it offers lots of activities. >> Correct!9. Look for a place near your house, and check out _d_ exercise instructors and personal trainers. >> THE 10. They should be educated in physical education or certtified by the organization such as the American Council on exercise. >> AN

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