Here is my homework Tina ^^

Hello~ This is a Monday that is first day of a week and starting day of a week. I hope that you have a great and happiness a week! I'm busy today. Because my two friends just finished their military service, so we have a party tonight. For this reason I submit my homework early. HA! HA! HA! Here is my home work. Put in the correct verb forms into the gaps. Use Simple Present. 1. Do you wanna drink mineral water? 2. How many times Sarah and Linda feed their pets for the day? 3. When did your teacher check your homework? 4. How long did they in the old house? 5. Are the cat always sitting on the wall in the morning? Teacher I have a one request for you. I'll go to Busan on Thursday afternoon. So I can attend class on Thursday but I can't on Friday. So can you call me other number? on Friday? I'll show you about that number in Wednesday or Thursday. Is that okay?

Good afternoon!
You sure had a great laugh doing your homework earlier.
I presume you were in a bit of a hurry because you are so excited for your party later.
Well, I can sense that you will have fun with your friends.
By the way, regarding your request, I will gladly endorse it to our manager but you truly have to call our manager about this matter.
I am not authorized to make some changes regarding the nature of your classes.
But then again, we can talk about this matter a little further during our class.
We can somehow sort things out and make some clarifications.
Thank you for informing me about this.^^
Say \"hi\" to your friends for me!
Take care!
_T.Tina^^
Hello~
>> Correct
OR >> Hello!
This is a Monday that is first day of a week and starting day of a week.
>> Today is Monday, that is the first and starting day of the week.
I hope that you have a great and happiness a week!
>> I hope that you will have a great and happy week!
I\'m busy today.
>> Correct
Because my two friends just finished their military service, so we have a party tonight.
>> Correct
For this reason I submit my homework early. HA! HA! HA!
>> For this reason, I am submitting my homework earlier.
Here is my home work.
>> Correct
Put in the correct verb forms into the gaps. Use Simple Present.
1. Do you wanna drink mineral water?
>> Do you drink mineral water?
2. How many times Sarah and Linda feed their pets for the day?
>> Do Sarah and Linda feed their pets?
3. When did your teacher check your homework?
>> Does your teacher check your homework?
4. How long did they in the old house?
>> Do they live in the old house?
5. Are the cat always sitting on the wall in the morning?
>> Does the cat sit on the wall in the morning?
Teacher I have a one request for you.
>> Teacher, I have a request for you.
>> Teacher, I have one request.
I\'ll go to Busan on Thursday afternoon.
>> Correct
So I can attend class on Thursday but I can\'t on Friday.
>> Correct
So can you call me other number? on Friday?
>> So, can you call my other number on Friday?
I\'ll show you about that number in Wednesday or Thursday. Is that okay?
>> I\'ll show you my number on Wednesday or Thursday, is that okay?