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1. Have you ever been to New York? - right 2. I have ever been to New York. - I have been to New york 3. He is a engineer. - right 4. I like to listen music. - I like to listen to music 5. Yesterday, I played tennis. - I played a tennis 6. My father often swim in that lake. - My father often swims in the lake 7. Do you have many money? - Do you have much money 8. My mother hates gamble. - My mother hates to gamble Carolyn finished her test today. After that, we went to eat breakfast at 12:00 PM. May be, It is a lunch rather than break fast because of the time. we really enjoy ourselves. We ate steak salad, pilaf. It's for four-people size, but we ate all of the food. Carolyn and I were full even now so we decided not to eat any food for dinner. We also had a good time that riding a waterbike by the river. it was the first time to ride a bike on the water so It was really awkward for both of us, however we began to get used to it soon. it was great time.

What a great activity! I am sure that you really had fun together. Wow! That was already brunch. ( breakfast and lunch) Hihihi! Thank you for sharing a lot of things. Can\'t wait to hear more of your stories, [이름]. Have a great week ahead of you. Smile! Teacher Nina   1. Have you ever been to New York? - right >> Correct! 2. I have ever been to New York. - I have been to New york >> Correct! 3. He is a engineer. - right >> He is an engineer.4. I like to listen music. - I like to listen to music >> Correct! >> OR: I like listening to music.5. Yesterday, I played tennis. - I played a tennis >> Yesterday, I played tennis - correct 6. My father often swim in that lake. - My father often swims in the lake >> Correct! 7. Do you have many money? - Do you have much money >> Better: Do you have a lot of money?8. My mother hates gamble. - My mother hates to gamble >> Correct! >> OR: My mother hates gambling.Carolyn finished her test today. >> Correct! After that, we went to eat breakfast at 12:00 PM. >> Did you mean: After that, we had breakfast at 12 noon.May be, It is a lunch rather than break fast because of the time. >> Mabye, it was already a meal for lunch rather than breakfast because of the time.we really enjoy ourselves. >> We really enjoyed ourselves/ We ate steak salad, pilaf. >> We ate steak, salad and pilaf. ( What do you mean by pilaf? ) It\'s for four-people size, but we ate all of the food. >> It was for four people,but we ate all of the food. >> OR: The food was good for four people, but we ate it all. Carolyn and I were full even now so we decided not to eat any food for dinner. >> Carolyn and I feel full until now, so we decided not to eat any food for dinner. >> OR: Carolyn and I are still full, so we decided not to eat anything for dinner. a good time that riding a waterbike by the river. >> Did you mean: It is a good time to ride a waterbike nearby the river. >> OR: It is a great time to ride a waterbike by the river. it was the first time to ride a bike on the water so It was really awkward for both of us, however we began to get used to it soon. >> Did you mean: It was our first time to ride a bike on the water, so it was really awkward for the both of us. However, began to like it. >> OR: It was our first time to ride a bike beside the river, it was really awkard for the both of us. However, we will get used to it. it was great time. >> Did you mean: We had a great time.