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The movie teach us to know our forefather\'s effort. as a result, our life is comfortable and safe and free. And That the emotion which l felt after watching movie is mostly t[이름]kful. So l think the movie teach us to know that emotion. And l also thought the peace is really important in our life. And the movie also teach us the danger of war.
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The movie teach us to know our forefather\'s effort. as a result, our life is comfortable and safe and free.
>>The film teaches us to appreciate our forefathers\' sacrifices. As a result, we live a comfortable, secure, and free life.
And That the emotion which l felt after watching movie is mostly t[이름]kful.
>> Moreover, I felt mostly gratitude after watching the movie.
So l think the movie teach us to know that emotion.
>>Correct!
>> OR: I believe that the movie helps us understand that emotion.
>> OR: I believe that the movie helps us understand that emotion.
And l also thought the peace is really important in our life.
>>Correct!
>>OR: Additionally, I believed that maintaining peace in our lives was important.
>>OR: Additionally, I believed that maintaining peace in our lives was important.
And the movie also teach us the danger of war.
>> Correct!
>>OR: The movie also teaches us about the distress of war.
>>OR: The movie also teaches us about the distress of war.
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