hero
학생이 쓴 원문
I considered about my hero for two days, still I wasn't sure. Even I don't have any role model and great man. You might have thoght that “Who is your hero?" is very simple question, but it was difficult for me. Someday I'll sure who is my hero, I'll tell you.
I decided to study English grammar again. I feel limit of my English ability and I forget English grammar what I learned. Just to study English for test is boring, but to study English for our class is exciting. I'll participate school English essay contest next month. For contest, I'll have to study English very hard. It isn't easy but I'll try.
Yesterday, my friend broken up his girl friend. She just sent to say good bye for message not on face. I think it is bad manners. My friend was very sad but I couldn't do anything.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Oh your friend is pitiful.
I hope he will feel better soon.
About your hero, I’ll be looking forward to it.
See you on Monday,
Connie
I considered about my hero for two days, still I wasn't sure.
>> I’d been thinking about my hero for two days but I’m not yet sure.
Even I don't have any role model and great man.
>> I don’t even have any role models and a great man.
You might have thoght that “Who is your hero?" is very simple question, but it was difficult for me.
>> I thought the questions “Who is you hero?” a very simple one but it’s difficult for me.
Someday I'll sure who is my hero, I'll tell you.
>> Someday, if I’ll be sure who my hero is, I’ll tell you. I decided to study English grammar again.
>> Correct
I feel limit of my English ability and I forget English grammar what I learned.
>> I feel that I have limited English ability and I also forgot English grammar that I’ve learned.
Just to study English for test is boring, but to study English for our class is exciting.
>> Studying English for test is boring but to study English for our class is exciting.
I'll participate school English essay contest next month.
>> I’ll participate in the school English essay contest next month.
For contest, I'll have to study English very hard. It isn't easy but I'll try.
>> CorrectYesterday, my friend broken up his girl friend.
>> Yesterday my friend broke up with his girlfriend.
She just sent to say good bye for message not on face.
>> She just sent a message to say goodbye but she didn’t show up.
I think it is bad manners.
>> It think it is bad manner.
My friend was very sad but I couldn't do anything.
>> Correct
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