Hesitation

2020-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I am a kind of person who tend to give a suggestion first, but there must be a time when I hesitate to do that. Actually, I think when a person who is doing something with me is really excited and scheduling everything by himself, I usually do not suggest something. Because I know how happy he is feeling now and I can understand how he will feel if I suggest another thing to him. For example, my friend and I usually go to a gym together and work out. When he comes to the gym after he watched several videos related to working out routine and he wants to try it, I normally accept his suggestion and do not talk about anything.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jay,

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Have a nice day!

Teacher ELLY.

Hesitation

I am a kind of person who tend to give a suggestion first, but there must be a time when I hesitate to do that.

>>I am a kind of person who tends to give a suggestion first, but there are times when I hesitate to do it.

Actually, I think when a person who is doing something with me is really excited and scheduling everything by himself, I usually do not suggest something.

>>Actually, I think when a person collaborates in a task or a project with me, and he is really excited and schedules everything independently, I usually do not suggest anything.

Because I know how happy he is feeling now and I can understand how he will feel if I suggest another thing to him.

>>Because I know how happy he is feeling now and I can understand how he will feel if I suggest something to him.

For example, my friend and I usually go to a gym together and workout.

CORRECT!

or>>For instance, I often workout go to a gym with my friend.

When he comes to the gym after he watched several videos related to working out routine and he wants to try it, I normally accept his suggestion and do not talk about anything.

>>When he comes to the gym after watching several videos related to workout routines and he wants to try it, I normally accept his suggestion without saying anything.

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