Hesitation
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Hesitation
I am a kind of person who tend to give a suggestion first, but there must be a time when I hesitate to do that.
>>I am a kind of person who tends to give a suggestion first, but there are times when I hesitate to do it.
Actually, I think when a person who is doing something with me is really excited and scheduling everything by himself, I usually do not suggest something.
>>Actually, I think when a person collaborates in a task or a project with me, and he is really excited and schedules everything independently, I usually do not suggest anything.
Because I know how happy he is feeling now and I can understand how he will feel if I suggest another thing to him.
>>Because I know how happy he is feeling now and I can understand how he will feel if I suggest something to him.
For example, my friend and I usually go to a gym together and workout.
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or>>For instance, I often workout go to a gym with my friend.
When he comes to the gym after he watched several videos related to working out routine and he wants to try it, I normally accept his suggestion and do not talk about anything.
>>When he comes to the gym after watching several videos related to workout routines and he wants to try it, I normally accept his suggestion without saying anything.
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