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When the people live in the earth without medicines,It will be terrible.
Without anesthetic,the person who will have a sergery will be painful vwry much.
Without antibiotic,the people who fight in a war will die.
Without vaccine,the new virus like H5N1 and herpes-B virus will occupy the earth.
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I totally agree with your ideas TOM!
I am proud of you! I can say that you are really learning new words and expressions these day.
I encourage you to use it in class. It will help you compose simple to complex sentences.
Don\'t give up, okay? Have a great night.
Sweet dreams.Teacher Nina
When the people live in the earth without medicines,It will be terrible.>> When people live in the Earth without medicines, it will be terrible.
Without anesthetic,the person who will have a sergery will be painful vwry much.
>> Without anesthetic, the person who will have a surgery will be really painful. Without antibiotic,the people who fight in a war will die.>> Without antibiotic, the people who fight in a war will die.
>> OR: Without antibiotic, the people who got hurt during a war will die. Without vaccine,the new virus like H5N1 and herpes-B virus will occupy the earth.
>> Without vaccine, a new viruses like H5N1 and Herpes-B will spread in the Earth.
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