Hey
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Hello [이름]!
I honestly believe that you deserve 5 out of 7 for every category. I think you invest a lot of your attention, time and energy to perftecting your skill and it is very evident in class. Good job! You know, I love Penelope because, it is a symbol of how young girls go through a stage of feeling unpretty like a pig. Anyway, great job on your composition! Just remember our basic rules of capitalization and spelling, okay? These are my corrections:
I can't wait to talk to you again [이름]! Have a good evening!
Karla
Hey :)
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It was amazing class with you again!
>>It was an amazing class with you again!
I was happy that you knew what Penelope is.
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We have a lot of subjuects to talk,so that's why we can't go on our book.
>>We have a lot of subjects to talk about, so that's why we can't discuss the book.
But I guess it's much funnier than talking about educational subject.
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It's great thing,Isnt it?
>>Its a great thing, isn't it?
Also I felt that you were trying to do lots of things for our conversation,didn't you say you had looked for the 'SKINS' on the Internet?
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I got impressed in a good way!
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Oh my!
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I got 5 stars out of the whole parts!
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You think I am doing good?
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I'll do my best until I (can) express my feelings in english like natives.
>>I'll do my best until I can express my feelings in English like natives.
Wish me a good luck!!
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