hey
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I had a really great time talking about those things in class today.
You are a very unconventional teen, you remind me of myself when I was your age.
Anyway these are my corrections for your composition. Have a great evening! ^^
Karla
hey :)
I would register our talking class again!
>>I would register on our talking class again!
So there's nothing you have to worry about!
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Actually I didn't think that our relationships is going to be continuous,but when you said what I really like kind of singers from america or england and shows from america even from england,I realized that you are on the same page with me.
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It's cool I guess!!
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And...you know what?
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I was watching TV when you were gaving me a call.
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So I was kinda embarassed,that's why my dog bared!
>>So I was kinda embarassed, that's why my dog barked!
Because he always barks whenever I run lol
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We've had a great class so far!
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You think so too?
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So..from friday,we're gonna start new class.
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Let's have a fun!
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