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today, my friend buy me a chinese food.
i really like chinese food. we ate 3 dishes.
after lunch, we went to caffe to eat icecream.
we ate icecream and tolk about report and coming test.
after the talk, we went around our school to see a cherry blossoms.
and we took a picture.
i will have to study 6 subjects for midterm. but i think it is easier than last semester. last semester i had to undergo an exam only 5 subjects. but that time, i underwent test for 3 subjects on one day.
do you understand what i mean? forexample, last semester , i took 3 test on monday. and that subjects are very important for me.
anyway i have to study in now~ see yah!
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today, my friend buy me a chinese food.
>>Today, my friend bought me Chinese food.i really like chinese food.
>>CORRECT J but it should be written like this.
>>I really like Chinese food.
we ate 3 dishes.
>>CORRECT J
>>Our meal consisted of three dishes. -->> BETTERafter lunch, we went to caffe to eat icecream.
>>After lunch, we went to a caf?to eat ice cream.we ate icecream and tolk about report and coming test.
>>We ate ice cream and talked about the report and the coming test.after the talk, we went around our school to see a cherry blossoms.
>>After the talk, we went around the school to see the cherry blossoms.and we took a picture.
>>CORRECT i will have to study 6 subjects for midterm.
>>CORRECT J
but i think it is easier than last semester.
>>CORRECT J
last semester i had to undergo an exam only 5 subjects.
>>Last semester, I had to undergo an exam for 5 subjects.
but that time, i underwent test for 3 subjects on one day.
>>Bu that time, I underwent tests for 3 subjects on one day.do you understand what i mean?
>>CORRECT J
forexample, last semester , i took 3 test on monday.
>>For example, last semester, I took 3 tests on Monday.
and that subjects are very important for me.
>>And those subjects are very important for me.anyway i have to study in now~ see yah!
>>Anyway, I have to study now! See yah!
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