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2011-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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today, my friend buy me a chinese food. i really like chinese food. we ate 3 dishes. after lunch, we went to caffe to eat icecream. we ate icecream and tolk about report and coming test. after the talk, we went around our school to see a cherry blossoms. and we took a picture. i will have to study 6 subjects for midterm. but i think it is easier than last semester. last semester i had to undergo an exam only 5 subjects. but that time, i underwent test for 3 subjects on one day. do you understand what i mean? forexample, last semester , i took 3 test on monday. and that subjects are very important for me. anyway i have to study in now~ see yah!

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Hi, [이름]. Thanks for dropping by. Please capitalize the letters or words that need to be capitalized. Observe and practice proper writing. *** today, my friend buy me a chinese food. >>Today, my friend bought me Chinese food.i really like chinese food. >>CORRECT J but it should be written like this. >>I really like Chinese food. we ate 3 dishes. >>CORRECT J >>Our meal consisted of three dishes. -->> BETTERafter lunch, we went to caffe to eat icecream. >>After lunch, we went to a caf?to eat ice cream.we ate icecream and tolk about report and coming test.  >>We ate ice cream and talked about the report and the coming test.after the talk, we went around our school to see a cherry blossoms. >>After the talk, we went around the school to see the cherry blossoms.and we took a picture.  >>CORRECT i will have to study 6 subjects for midterm. >>CORRECT J but i think it is easier than last semester. >>CORRECT J last semester i had to undergo an exam only 5 subjects. >>Last semester, I had to undergo an exam for 5 subjects. but that time, i underwent test for 3 subjects on one day. >>Bu that time, I underwent tests for 3 subjects on one day.do you understand what i mean? >>CORRECT J forexample, last semester , i took 3 test on monday. >>For example, last semester, I took 3 tests on Monday. and that subjects are very important for me.  >>And those subjects are very important for me.anyway i have to study in now~ see yah! >>Anyway, I have to study now! See yah!  

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