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I woke up very late today. i think i need to wake up early tomorrow.
but it`s hard to wake up early at summer vacation and then i ate hamburger for brunch at near my home. when i got home i watched the Lala land. i wanted to watch that movie because my friend told me that movie makes me to want to go LA. owing to i have a plan to go LA next week.i watched that movie. after watching that movie i feel like to go LA as soon as possible. and i impressed in the process to acieve their dream.after that i went to caffe to meet my friends. we talk a lot. and i ate pork cutlet for dinner and i take a nap in the home. i went to to work out. it was the day to exercise lower body movement. it was one's least body parts to exercise after that i`m in pc room to play soccer game with my friend
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Hi there [이름]! I appreciate your message. I hope to often hear from you. You can send me anything! ^_^ Just express your thoughts.
~T. Irene~
I woke up very late today.
>>> Correct.
I think I need to wake up early tomorrow.
>>> Correct.
but it`s hard to wake up early at summer vacation and then i ate hamburger for brunch at near my home.
>>> But it`s hard to wake up early during the summer vacation. Then, I ate hamburger for brunch near my home.
when i got home i watched the Lala land.
>>> When I got home, I watched Lala land.
i wanted to watch that movie because my friend told me that movie makes me to want to go LA.
>>> I wanted to watch that movie because my friend recommended it to me. It made me want to visit LA.
owing to i have a plan to go LA next week.
>>> For that reason, I have a plan to go to LA next week.
i watched that movie. after watching that movie i feel like to go LA as soon as possible.
>>> After watching the movie, I felt I needed to go to LA as soon as possible.
and i impressed in the process to acieve their dream.
>>> I was impressed by how they achieved their dream.
after that i went to caffe to meet my friends.
>>> After that, I went to a cafe to meet my friends.
we talk a lot.
>>> We talked a lot.
and i ate pork cutlet for dinner and i take a nap in the home.
>>> I ate pork cutlet for dinner and slept at home.
i went to to work out.
>>> I went to the gym to workout.
it was the day to exercise lower body movement.
>>> I had to do some lower body exercises.
it was one\'s least body parts to exercise after that i`m in pc room to play soccer game with my friend
>>> My lower body is the least exercised part of my body. After exercising, I go to the PC room to play online soccer with my friend.
~T. Irene~
I woke up very late today.
>>> Correct.
I think I need to wake up early tomorrow.
>>> Correct.
but it`s hard to wake up early at summer vacation and then i ate hamburger for brunch at near my home.
>>> But it`s hard to wake up early during the summer vacation. Then, I ate hamburger for brunch near my home.
when i got home i watched the Lala land.
>>> When I got home, I watched Lala land.
i wanted to watch that movie because my friend told me that movie makes me to want to go LA.
>>> I wanted to watch that movie because my friend recommended it to me. It made me want to visit LA.
owing to i have a plan to go LA next week.
>>> For that reason, I have a plan to go to LA next week.
i watched that movie. after watching that movie i feel like to go LA as soon as possible.
>>> After watching the movie, I felt I needed to go to LA as soon as possible.
and i impressed in the process to acieve their dream.
>>> I was impressed by how they achieved their dream.
after that i went to caffe to meet my friends.
>>> After that, I went to a cafe to meet my friends.
we talk a lot.
>>> We talked a lot.
and i ate pork cutlet for dinner and i take a nap in the home.
>>> I ate pork cutlet for dinner and slept at home.
i went to to work out.
>>> I went to the gym to workout.
it was the day to exercise lower body movement.
>>> I had to do some lower body exercises.
it was one\'s least body parts to exercise after that i`m in pc room to play soccer game with my friend
>>> My lower body is the least exercised part of my body. After exercising, I go to the PC room to play online soccer with my friend.
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