Hey~
학생이 쓴 원문
hello.
what i was going to say yesterday is my senior think i lack sincerity in writing E-mail to customers.
i am a super hard worker even i am wrinting this letter during working time.;D
conglatulation on your test again !
have a great day and weekend just in case i can't take class for today. hayhayhay
강사 첨삭
Hi!!!Thank you for your composition. Please review the corrections I made below. Have a wondeful day!!
hello.what i was going to say yesterday is my senior think i lack sincerity in writing E-mail to customers.>> What I was going to say yesterday is that, my senior thinks I lack sincerity in writing emails to customers.i am a super hard worker even i am wrinting this letter during working time.;D >> I am a hard worker even if Ia m writing this letter during my work time.conglatulation on your test again !>> Congratulations on your test again!have a great day and weekend just in case i can\'t take class for today. hayhayhay >> Correct. (Please don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of the word on your sentence and also capitalize the word I.)
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