Hey, Abby.
학생이 쓴 원문
Eveytime I watch the correction on the memo, I get to know how much you don't understand what I said.
For example you commented on the word"cause". Even though I said"costs".
I wanted to say the mud cookie costs 42won(in Korean money)
So it is difficult to eat those cookies (you know they are poor)
Of course it causes some sickness though.
I know that's because of my poor prononciation.
Actually I am going to take the lesson for prononciation.
but it is so popular that I can't take the class right away.
I am on the waiting list now. They said I won't be able to take the lesson until May
I hope it will give a lot of help to communicate
And I always thank you for your hard work.
See you later.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You made very minimal slips in grammar this time. It’s good that you know your weakness now so you could make a good pronunciation skill. Be careful of your spelling too and be mindful of the punctuation marks you should be using after the sentence. Just always remember that learning and studying English needs a lot of patience. Moreover, you’re good! Take care and enjoy the day!
ABBY “_)
Hey, Abby.
>> Hey Abby! (Informal)
>> Hi Abby!
Eveytime I watch the correction on the memo, I get to know how much you don't understand what I said.
>> Everytime I check your corrections for me, I get to know how much you don’t understand my speaking.For example you commented on the word"cause". Even though I said"costs".
>> An example of this is your comment on the word “cause” which I actually said costs.I wanted to say the mud cookie costs 42won(in Korean money)
>> I wanted to say that a mud cookie costs 42 won.So it is difficult to eat those cookies (you know they are poor)
>> So eating those cookies is quite difficult Of course it causes some sickness though.
>> Though it causes some sickness they couldn’t do anything cause they are poor.I know that's because of my poor prononciation.
>> I know that it’s because of my poor pronunciation.Actually I am going to take the lesson for prononciation.
>> Actually, I’m going to take a pronunciation lesson.but it is so popular that I can't take the class right away.
>> But it is obvious that I couldn’t take the class right away.I am on the waiting list now.
>> CORRECT
They said I won't be able to take the lesson until May
>> CORRECTI hope it will give a lot of help to communicate
>> I hope it will help me a lot in improving my communication skills.And I always thank you for your hard work.
>> CORRECTSee you later.
>> CORRECT
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