Hey Faye :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!!! I am [이름] !!!
I am so sorry...I have to change my class time because of my school...:(
I will miss you so much....and maybe I will see you in next month...!!!!
Hopefully !!!:D
Take care xxxx
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]:
Oh that is so sad... Especially when we are having great times together. You are one of my best students.
I feel bad but that is okay. I undestand that. I hope to see you again soon
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi!!! I am [이름] !!!
>>Hi! I am [이름]. OR: Hi! I’m [이름].I am so sorry...I have to change my class time because of my school...:(
>>I am so sorry, I have to change my class time because it has conflict with school time.
>>I am so sorry that I need to change my schedulewith you because it has conflict with my schedule in school. I will miss you so much....and maybe I will see you in next month...!!!!
>>I will be missing you so much and I hope to see you next month.
>>I will be missing you and I hope to have class with you again next month.Hopefully !!!:D
>>I really hope so.Take care xxxx
>>CORRECT but you need to put the properpunctuation like (.) period or (!) exclamation point.
(Take care!)
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