Hey, Lynn
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending in your composition. Yes, I think we had a good conversation yesterday too. I appreciate you letting me know what you\'d like the class set-up be. I am looking forward to a lively and informative discussion with you in our class. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
It was a good conversation.
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I am really happy to have a class with you from now on.
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As I mentioned, I don\'t want any burden in this talking.
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OR>> As I mentioned, I don\'t want any burden in taking this class.
I believe any burden makes it difficult for me to last this class.
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Any topic you want to discuss is okay.
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If you don\'t know what to discuss, you may let me know what you read or what you heard.
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Otherwise, I\'m gonna let you know what\'s going on here in Korea these days.
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OR>> Otherwise, I\'m going to let know what\'s going on here in Korea these days.
English is not that easy, huh?
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I think there is no end in English studying.
>>I think there is no end in studying English.
Especially, I have read many junior novels in an effort to increase vocabulary.
>> I have read many junior novels in an effort to increase my vocabulary.
Although many books are increasingly stacked on the shelves, there are still many words I don\'t know in the books. ^^
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Anyway, let\'s have a talk tomorrow.
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Have a nice day.
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Until then, bye.
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