Hey, Lynn

2016-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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It was a good conversation. I am really happy to have a class with you from now on. As I mentioned, I don't want any burden in this talking. I believe any burden makes it difficult for me to last this class. Any topic you want to discuss is okay. If you don't know what to discuss, you may let me know what you read or what you heard. Otherwise, I'm gonna let you know what's going on here in Korea these days. English is not that easy, huh? I think there is no end in English studying. Especially, I have read many junior novels in an effort to increase vocabulary. Although many books are increasingly stacked on the shelves, there are still many words I don't know in the books. ^^ Anyway, let's have a talk tomorrow. Have a nice day. Until then, byd.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for sending in your composition. Yes, I think we had a good conversation yesterday too. I appreciate you letting me know what you\'d like the class set-up be. I am looking forward to a lively and informative discussion with you in our class. See you later!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

It was a good conversation.

>>correct!

I am really happy to have a class with you from now on.

>>correct!

As I mentioned, I don\'t want any burden in this talking.

>>correct

OR>> As I mentioned, I don\'t want any burden in taking this class.

I believe any burden makes it difficult for me to last this class.

>>correct!

Any topic you want to discuss is okay.

>>correct!

If you don\'t know what to discuss, you may let me know what you read or what you heard.

>>correct!

Otherwise, I\'m gonna let you know what\'s going on here in Korea these days.

>>correct! (informal)

OR>> Otherwise, I\'m going to let know what\'s going on here in Korea these days.

English is not that easy, huh?

>>correct!

I think there is no end in English studying.

>>I think there is no end in studying English.

Especially, I have read many junior novels in an effort to increase vocabulary.

>> I have read many junior novels in an effort to increase my vocabulary.

Although many books are increasingly stacked on the shelves, there are still many words I don\'t know in the books. ^^

>>correct!

Anyway, let\'s have a talk tomorrow.

>>correct!

Have a nice day.

>>correct!

Until then, bye.

>>correct!

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