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학생이 쓴 원문
1.lend
2.borrow
3.borrow
4.borrow
5.lend
6.borrow
Today,I saw the spider hunts the small larva.
And that spider didn't make a spider's shread.
It jumped on the larva,and it bited.
It was so fast.
suddenly,the larva didn't move.
I think that spider has poison.
But my P.E.teacher says"The rest time is over.Now let's start another game!!~~~~"
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear TOM^^
Happy Wednesday! You did a pretty nice job! I think you were a bit confused about the homework. I will be glad to explain it to you. I am so happy that you always send me an composition, it will really help you improve your skills. I am scared of spiders! You are really brave. Can\'t wait to talk to you in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner.
Teacher Nina
1.lend
>> Correct!2.borrow
>> Correct!3.borrow
>> lend 4.borrow
>> lend 5.lend
>> borrow 6.borrow>> Correct!Today,I saw the spider hunts the small larva.
>> Today, I saw the spider was hunting the small larva.And that spider didn\'t make a spider\'s shread.
>> Did you mean: And that spider didn\'t make a thread.
>> OR: And that spider didn\'t make a web.It jumped on the larva,and it bited.
>> It jumped into the larva and it was bitten by the spider.It was so fast.
>> Correct! suddenly,the larva didn\'t move.
>> Correct! I think that spider has poison.
>> I think that spider has a poison. But my P.E.teacher says\"The rest time is over.Now let\'s start another game!!~~~~\"
>> But my P.E. teacher said, \"Rest time is over, let\'s play another game.\"
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