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2013-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.lend 2.borrow 3.borrow 4.borrow 5.lend 6.borrow Today,I saw the spider hunts the small larva. And that spider didn't make a spider's shread. It jumped on the larva,and it bited. It was so fast. suddenly,the larva didn't move. I think that spider has poison. But my P.E.teacher says"The rest time is over.Now let's start another game!!~~~~"

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear TOM^^ Happy Wednesday! You did a pretty nice job! I think you were a bit confused about the homework. I will be glad to explain it to you. I am so happy that you always send me an composition, it will really help you improve your skills. I am scared of spiders! You are really brave. Can\'t wait to talk to you in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner. Teacher Nina 1.lend >> Correct!2.borrow >> Correct!3.borrow >> lend 4.borrow >> lend 5.lend >> borrow 6.borrow>> Correct!Today,I saw the spider hunts the small larva. >> Today, I saw the spider was hunting the small larva.And that spider didn\'t make a spider\'s shread. >> Did you mean: And that spider didn\'t make a thread. >> OR: And that spider didn\'t make a web.It jumped on the larva,and it bited. >> It jumped into the larva and it was bitten by the spider.It was so fast. >> Correct! suddenly,the larva didn\'t move. >> Correct! I think that spider has poison. >> I think that spider has a poison. But my P.E.teacher says\"The rest time is over.Now let\'s start another game!!~~~~\" >> But my P.E. teacher said, \"Rest time is over, let\'s play another game.\"

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