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Good evening and happy Friday Tom. ^^
Thank you for always making me feel great.
You never fail to answer the questions in complete sentences in class.
Great job with your sentences today.
Keep it up! Have a nice weekend.
Please go over the corrections below.
Teacher Nina
I want to mamage the SAMSUNG.
>> I want to manage Samsung.
When the energy all gone,we can\'t live.
>> When the energy is all gone, we can\'t live.
It\'s my pleasure.
>> correct
I feel like that I stressed every day.
>> I feel stressed everyday.
>> OR: I am stressed everyday.
I am the most jolly person in thhe space.
>> I am the jolliest person in space.
According to the book,Human can\'t live forever.
>> correct
>> According to the book, humans can\'t live forever.
When the sun become red supergiant it will gobble up the half of solar system.
>> Did you mean: When the sun becomes red and big, it will gobble up half of the solar system.
If few people save from the red supergiant,We also can\'t live.
>> Did you mean: If few people will be saved from the red supergiant. We can\'t also live.
Because of the huge amounts of radioactivity.
>> It is because of the huge amounts of radioactivity.
Of course We will die when the red supergight gobble up the half of the solar system.
>> Of course, we will die when the red giant gobble up the half of the solar system.
But there is the way to survive from them.
>> But there is a way to survive it.
THere is a moon called Europa.
>> correct
Scientist think that under the ground of europa,there will be the sea and ice.
>> Scientists think that under the ground of Europa, there is a sea and ice.
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