HI- LEI
학생이 쓴 원문
hi- this is kim-
today class was very fun :)
i found him who you misunderstood :)
he looks moer moer younger than me ㅠㅋㅋ
i know- i am getting old after finsh airforce service for 2yearsㅠ..
sometimes i can find deep winkles under my eyesㅋㅋㅋ..
airforce service was made me like that ㅠㅠ..ㅋㅋ
Do you know what is the best way to refind my original face??ㅋㅋ
anyway- i hope my philipins tracher in cebu is the one like you-
funny and kind and have a so many patiennt:)
after finish my commpsition l have to go my university to meet my profesor
he will give me a a lot of work to do- so stressㅠ... expecially almost will be english :)
i'll never speak english without you-:)
whatever i am fine - ㅋㅋ see you tommorow LEI-
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim!!
Honestly, I cannot recommend any methods for refining one’s skin (because I don’t use any). I think the best medicine for that is to stay happy and positive all the time. Because if you worry too much, you will be having a lot of wrinkles. As they say, “LAUGHTER IS THE BEST MEDICINE”. I hope you will be having a kind teacher too. You know I am sad that you need to stop having phone classes but I understand that you need to do it for you to improve yourself. See you tomorrow Kim.
Lei J
hi- this is kim->>correcttoday class was very fun :)>>Today’s class was very fun :)i found him who you misunderstood :)>>I found the person’s photo, whom you mistaken to be mehe looks moer moer younger than me ㅠㅋㅋ>>he looks a lot younger than me.i know- i am getting old after finsh airforce service for 2yearsㅠ..>>I know, I am getting old after I finished two years of airforce servicesometimes i can find deep wrinkles under my eyesㅋㅋㅋ..>>correctairforce service was made me like that ㅠㅠ..ㅋㅋ>>airforce service made me look like thatDo you know what is the best way to refind my original face??ㅋㅋ>> Do you know what is the best way to refine my skin??anyway- i hope my philipins tracher in cebu is the one like you->>anyways, I hope my Filipino teacher in Cebu is like youfunny and kind and have a so many patiennt:)>>Funny, kind and patientafter finish my commpsition l have to go my university to meet my profesor>>after I finish my composition, I have to go to my university and meet my professorhe will give me a a lot of work to do- so stressㅠ... expecially almost will be english :) >>He will be giving me a lot of work – so stressed…Specially most of them will be englishi'll never speak english without you-:)
>>I’ll never speak English better without your helpwhatever i am fine - ㅋㅋ see you tommorow LEI-
>>correct
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