HI
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HI How are you, Joan^^
I don't know about wednesday's brainwork. sorry
I try to find it but I don't know what the question means.
so today I want to talk with you.^^
it's 00:19 am thursdays. I can't go on bed.
I'm so sad. ㅠㅠ I talk with my brother for a hour on the phone.
He was good on study so he entered the Korea Police University.
He become police officer in 24! He is young but he acts like adult.
I envy and proud of him. He worried about my future.
He consider about my talent. You know, I want to study fashion.
But he think I have not and act willfully.
He is good guy but have good character, so he say to me with anger.
Also, I didn't set my decision for my university.
I'm waiting the anoouncement. This night is so sad ㅠㅠ
I warried about that thesedays.
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Hi thank you for the composition:) Have a great day:) Take care!
HI How are you, Joan^^
>>CORRECTI don\'t know about wednesday\'s brainwork. sorry
>>I don\'t know my Wednesday\'s homework. I\'m sorry.I try to find it but I don\'t know what the question means.
>>I tried to find out but I don\'t really know what the question means.So today I want to talk with you.^^
>>CORRECT
it\'s 00:19 am thursdays. I can\'t go on bed.
>>It\'s 00:19 am now. I can\'t go to bed yet.I\'m so sad. ㅠㅠ I talk with my brother for a hour on the phone.
>>I\'m so sad. I talked with my brother for a hour on the phone.He was good on study so he entered the Korea Police University.
>>He studied well so he was able to enter Korea Police University.He become police officer in 24! He is young but he acts like adult.
>>He will be a police officer on 24! He is young but he acts like an adult.I envy and proud of him. He worried about my future.
>>I envy him but at the same time I am proud.He worries about my future.He consider about my talent.
>>He considers my talent.
You know, I want to study fashion.>>CORRECT
But he think I have not and act willfully.>>But he thinks I will not act willfully.
He is good guy but have good character, so he say to me with anger.
>>He is a good guy with a good character but he said that to me with anger.Also, I didn\'t set my decision for my university.
>>Also, I didn\'t have my decision yet which University will I be enrolling.I\'m waiting the anoouncement.
>>I\'m waiting for the announcement.
This night is so sad ㅠㅠ
>>CORRECTI warried about that thesedays.
>>These days, I am so worried.
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