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2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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HI How are you, Joan^^ I don't know about wednesday's brainwork. sorry I try to find it but I don't know what the question means. so today I want to talk with you.^^ it's 00:19 am thursdays. I can't go on bed. I'm so sad. ㅠㅠ I talk with my brother for a hour on the phone. He was good on study so he entered the Korea Police University. He become police officer in 24! He is young but he acts like adult. I envy and proud of him. He worried about my future. He consider about my talent. You know, I want to study fashion. But he think I have not and act willfully. He is good guy but have good character, so he say to me with anger. Also, I didn't set my decision for my university. I'm waiting the anoouncement. This night is so sad ㅠㅠ I warried about that thesedays.

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Hi thank you for the composition:) Have a great day:) Take care!   HI How are you, Joan^^ >>CORRECTI don\'t know about wednesday\'s brainwork. sorry >>I don\'t know my Wednesday\'s homework. I\'m sorry.I try to find it but I don\'t know what the question means. >>I tried to find out but I don\'t really know what the question means.So today I want to talk with you.^^ >>CORRECT it\'s 00:19 am thursdays. I can\'t go on bed. >>It\'s 00:19 am now. I can\'t go to bed yet.I\'m so sad. ㅠㅠ I talk with my brother for a hour on the phone. >>I\'m so sad.  I talked with my brother for a hour on the phone.He was good on study so he entered the Korea Police University. >>He studied well so he was able to enter Korea Police University.He become police officer in 24! He is young but he acts like adult. >>He will be  a police officer on 24! He is young but he acts like an adult.I envy and proud of him. He worried about my future. >>I envy him but at the same time I am proud.He worries about my future.He consider about my talent. >>He considers my talent. You know, I want to study fashion.>>CORRECT But he think I have not and act willfully.>>But he thinks I will not act willfully. He is good guy but have good character, so he say to me with anger. >>He is a good guy with a good character but he said that to me with anger.Also, I didn\'t set my decision for my university. >>Also, I didn\'t have my decision yet which University will I be enrolling.I\'m waiting the anoouncement. >>I\'m waiting for the announcement. This night is so sad ㅠㅠ >>CORRECTI warried about that thesedays. >>These days, I am so worried. 

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