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The materials are stacked in the filling hopper according to the number of rotations of the rotary feeder.
One load cell installed in the filling hopper measures the weight of material.
When the UP-DOWN device lifts the tray, butterfly valve2 opens and the material of the Filling hopper contains the tray.
When the UP-DOWN device puts the tray down, the tray moves forward.
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>>>One load cell was installed in the filling hopper to measure the weight of the material.
When the UP-DOWN device lifts the tray, butterfly valve2 opens and the material of the Filling hopper contains the tray.
Thank you for letting me correct your grammar. I hope this helped you in any way. ^_^
The materials are stacked in the filling hopper according to the number of rotations of the rotary feeder.
>>>The materials were stacked in the filling hopper according to the number of rotations of the rotary feeder.
One load cell installed in the filling hopper measures the weight of material.>>>The materials were stacked in the filling hopper according to the number of rotations of the rotary feeder.
>>>One load cell was installed in the filling hopper to measure the weight of the material.
When the UP-DOWN device lifts the tray, butterfly valve2 opens and the material of the Filling hopper contains the tray.
>>>When the \"Up-Down\" device lifts the tray, butterfly valve 2 opens, and the materials of the filling hopper contain the tray.
When the UP-DOWN device puts the tray down, the tray moves forward.
>>>When the \"Up-Down\" device puts the tray down, the tray moves forward.
When the UP-DOWN device puts the tray down, the tray moves forward.
>>>When the \"Up-Down\" device puts the tray down, the tray moves forward.
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