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Hi my teacher!!^^ I think it is first time to send you a letter. I promise I will do this more often! I am really enjoying our class!! This is becuase you are always smiling at me and kind to me, so I can try to do my best without worries and being shy!! I like it and appreciate your help! Anyway, I am worrring about upcoming my Toefl score! hahaha I think I could do it better, but I was so nervous that I could not do my best..... ㅠㅠ When I saw the test screen at first, my head went blank!! If I practice more, I could get 100 score in my test!! I believe taht "Practice makes perfect!!" Bye ^^ see you tomorrow!

Hi, [이름]. I am so happy to have read a message from you today.  I am also enjoying our class every time. Sometimes, we have more free talking than focusing on out book. I usually forget about the time because everything seems so interesting.  I really wanted to bring out the best from you. I am so happy that you feel comfortable with me. Always remember: I could also be your friend.  I know that these days are a little bit uncomfortable for you because of your TOEFL score. If you did your best in this exam, you don\'t have to worry about it much. I think everything happens for a reason. Whatever the outcome would be there\'s  a reason for that. I will pray for you. Cheer up, [이름]!  Don\'t blame yourself. It happens to everybody.  Like me... Teacher Michelle P.S. The questions I post for the essay writting as your homework are questions from the TOEFL exam (Written and Oral). Maybe you could pratice with these. Here are some corrections for you: Hi my teacher!!^^ >>Hi, my teacher!!^^I think it is first time to send you a letter. >>I think it is MY first time to send you a letter.I promise I will do this more often! >>CorrectI am really enjoying our class!! >>CorrectThis is becuase you are always smiling at me and kind to me, so I can try to do my best without worries and being shy!! >>CorrectI like it and appreciate your help! >>CorrectAnyway, I am worrring about upcoming my Toefl score! hahaha >>CorrectI think I could do it better, but I was so nervous that I could not do my best..... ㅠㅠ >>I think I could do better, but I was so nervous that I could not do my best..... ㅠㅠ When I saw the test screen at first, my head went blank!! >>CorrectIf I practice more, I could get 100 score in my test!! >>CorrectI believe taht \"Practice makes perfect!!\">>I believe that \"Practice makes perfect!!\"Bye ^^ see you tomorrow! >>Correct