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2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Because, that same theory your doing when you meet some one your lovers. You will want to know about him, what color he like, what kind fo food he like. who he does his childhood. etc,. So, meening of [visit museums when they travel to new places] is the man has interestin abour there. want to know history about ther, why their traditional colthes was made like that some thing like that. As I think, If someone,your foreign freind, want go your country museum that person visiting purpose was serious [이름]d not just palying. For example, I don't like go to the museum. But, If I go to Philippines than I want to go Philippines museum. Because, as I knowing you more and more I have interesting your country. ----------------- Thank you to praise me again. I don't had have confident my english skill. but, you praise me sometimes that make me confident myself. hihi. And i know I need more study. So, I will study more and more. Thank you Michelle~

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Hi! How are you? I hope you\'re doing fine and thank you for sending me your composition. I know it\'s hard to study English, just be patient and learn it by heart. I know you can. Just be confident always. Take care. Teacher Michelle Because, that same theory your doing when you meet some one your lovers. >>It is the same thing that you\'re doing whenever you meet someone.You will want to know about him, what color he like, what kind fo food he like. >>You want to know something about him, like what is his favorite color, what kinds of food he loves. who he does his childhood. etc,. >>What he does during childhood and many more.So, meening of [visit museums when they travel to new places] is the man has interestin abour there. >>It means that when you visit a museum or when you travel to new places, the person is interested about that place. want to know history about ther, why their traditional colthes was made like that some thing like that.>>I want to know the history about that place and also about their culture.As I think, If someone,your foreign freind, want go your country museum that person visiting purpose was serious [이름]d not just palying. >>For my opinion, when a person wants to go to a museum of a country or place, that person is serious about it and not just by visiting it as their choice.For example, I don\'t like go to the museum. >>I don\'t like to go to the museum. But, If I go to Philippines than I want to go Philippines museum. >>If I will fo to the Phillipines, I want to go to the Phillippine museum. Because, as I knowing you more and more I have interesting your country. >>Because as I learn more things about you, the more I am interested about your country.Thank you to praise me again. >>Thank you for praising me. I don\'t had have confident my english skill. but, you praise me sometimes that make me confident myself. >>I am not confident with my English skills but when you praise me that boosts-up my confidence.hihi. And i know I need more study. >>I know I need to study more. So, I will study more and more. >>So I will study harder.Thank you Michelle~ >>Correct >>Thank you Teacher Michelle

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